This is an interesting topic to me as a citizen of Surrey! Your standup is good, but I don't think you needed it to be sepearated. In any case, the interviews are good!
Hey Mel! You picked a great topic for your piece, and the shots that you included showed just how bad the problem is (with uneven pavement and cones everywhere). Your stand up was spot on! Well done :)
Hi Mel! Overall your video is good, a clear standup and the background shows how bad it will cause car accidents. This is a problem that around our life. Thank you for your standing out! Great Job!
Overall good video! I thought the idea was awesome. That road has been like that for ages its aweful... only thing I might do next time is maybe use less shots of the street. towards the end it almost felt like I was seeing all the shots for a second time. None the less good job!
You did a great job explaining what the issue was and an even better job showing the audience what the issue was via interviews and cut away still shots. Really good job !
This is an interesting topic to me as a citizen of Surrey! Your standup is good, but I don't think you needed it to be sepearated. In any case, the interviews are good!
ReplyDeleteHey Mel! You picked a great topic for your piece, and the shots that you included showed just how bad the problem is (with uneven pavement and cones everywhere). Your stand up was spot on! Well done :)
ReplyDeleteHi Mel! Overall your video is good, a clear standup and the background shows how bad it will cause car accidents. This is a problem that around our life. Thank you for your standing out! Great Job!
ReplyDeleteOverall good video! I thought the idea was awesome. That road has been like that for ages its aweful... only thing I might do next time is maybe use less shots of the street. towards the end it almost felt like I was seeing all the shots for a second time. None the less good job!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job explaining what the issue was and an even better job showing the audience what the issue was via interviews and cut away still shots. Really good job !
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